2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Hey Cid, I read through your application ^^ Much better then the last one you submitted but I did notice a few grammar mistakes here and there that you might want to take another look at. That is only the opinion of one writer to the next...^^

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay thanks. I need all the help I can get ^^

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Not a problem. If you want you can comment my application as well ^^ I too am looking for opinions!

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Sure will as soon as I get unbacked up.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay I fixed the ones I could spot. Do you see anymore?

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Hold on a sec..I shall check ^^

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: 'If given the chance I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I can'

I think there is something wrong with this sentance, I just don't know what...I think it should be

I will try my hardest to learn as fast as I can

or

I would try my hardest to learn as fast as I could.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: As a member of the crew it would gladly work hard to make Elftown better

As a member of the crew I will gladly work hard to make elftown better

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I would try to push the rest of the crew to recognize photographers

I will try to push the rest of the crew to recognize photographers.

In most of the paragraphs you are speaking in past tense, you might want to fix that

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: There's no problem there.

I am not sure that this is a sentence

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Literally, I'm a sponge

This is not a sentance either and neither is this;

Because I think I would be a productive member of the crew.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I'll keep this and brief. I love elftown.

This should be

I'll keep this breif; I love elftown.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: who may be stuck on any of their own ideas.

This sentance doesn't necessarily make sense

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I can multi-task when needed to so I have no problems juggling as many assignments given to me.

I can multi-task when needed so I have no problems juggling the many assinments given to me. ^^

Ok, that is all I have found so far...

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Wow...I suck at grammar.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: And you may want to add a link back to the apply to the crew

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: It's not a problem, I am just overyly obsessed with grammar. LOL. That is why I want to be an english major.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: And that's why I'm an art major XD

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: ^^ Anyway if you change the past tense to present tense and fix what I mentioned it should be good.

2008-11-13 [Chimes]: Mine was pretty much all in the past tense.. :P But then again... mine was weird. XD

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: OH! I want to read yours ^^

2008-11-13 [Chimes]: Mine's on apply to the crew in the crew section thinger. :] Second from bottom... I think.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: I went and checked it out ^^ And commented! Woot.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: Okay I fixed errors.

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: Alright cool.

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: *passes out*

2008-11-13 [Alexi Ice]: What?

2008-11-13 [Thunder Cid]: It was just a joke.

2008-11-14 [Alexi Ice]: I was just wondering why you passed out...lol.

2008-11-14 [Thunder Cid]: It was a joke about doing so much work.

2008-11-14 [Alexi Ice]: Check ^^ Lol.

2008-11-22 [Alexi Ice]: What did you change?

2008-11-22 [nehirwen]: He's a patroller now. ;)

2008-11-23 [Alexi Ice]: Oh ^^

2008-11-28 [Alexi Ice]: I wish you would add me as one of your supporters, even though you dont want any! I shall always support you!

2008-11-29 [Thunder Cid]: Awww *blush*

2008-11-29 [Alexi Ice]: ^^ ITs true, though!

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: What did you change Cid?

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: I listed my new title as an Elftown guide.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Oh I see ^^ Cool.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Yup ^^

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: You are still beating me in badges >< I don't know why! *Sob* I am TWO badges behind now!

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Hey I just put my balls to the wall and hunker down when work needs to be done my rival.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Lol. Your funny. Well I don't get badges for doing work around here. Lol.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: And why not?

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: *Shrugs* Well IDK, the ECM mods don't have specific badges I guess.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Oh I see.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Yep, thats fine though it is fun work, what I really want to do is become a daily poem mod...I even told Linderel that ^^ LOL.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Ironic I want to do some work with the featured story.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: The feature story?

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Yeah have you not seen it yet. It is fairly new I believe, but i caught wind of it about a week ago.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: No! Could you send me the link?

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Sure can featured story

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Thankies!

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Yep yep ^^

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: I feel dirty. I just nominated my own story...>> Normally I would never do that but...that badge is cute.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: No worries I did the same thing.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Lol! Thats ok if it is new they probably need nominations of anykind >> and it wasn't prohibited.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: I can't wait to see when they will start putting stories up.

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: Me either! Chimes is a genious!

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Kissing up much?

2009-03-18 [Chimes]: :P It's 'cause she knows I pop up everywhere.
Also, yes it is new, hence why it doesn't have a mainstreet slot yet. :] Cid, you found it a couple of days after it was set up, I think.

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Yeah I have a nose for things like that.

2009-03-18 [Chimes]: Or you saw it in my diary? :P

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Actually I didn't.

2009-03-18 [Chimes]: Well, you saw it somewhere. :P

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: I saw [Linderel]'s new badge and was wondering where it came from to be honest.

2009-03-18 [Chimes]: Then you did see it somewhere. :P Ha!

2009-03-18 [Thunder Cid]: Yep and I follow my nose XD

2009-03-18 [Alexi Ice]: No I honestly just think it is a genious idea...>> Lol.

2009-03-22 [Alexi Ice]: More accomplishments?

2009-03-23 [Thunder Cid]: Just a few :P

2009-03-23 [Chimes]: Tell us what you update too. :] Sometimes we don't see it.

2009-03-23 [Thunder Cid]: I edited some mistakes mistakes and listed some acomplishments, competitions, and other heddate site work I do.

2009-03-23 [Alexi Ice]: Like what??? I love to hear of your accomplishments!

2009-03-23 [Thunder Cid]: I have listed them.

2009-03-23 [nehirwen]: There is a 'view diff' button too. >.>

2009-03-24 [Alexi Ice]: Maybe you need to be more specific on your ET requirements section? That might help.

2009-06-16 [LinkTurrner]: man no Supporters cid I would have been one

2009-06-28 [Alexi Ice]: Cutting down?

2009-06-28 [Thunder Cid]: Just getting to the bare minimums.

2009-07-01 [Alexi Ice]: Obviously a good strategy ^^ !

2009-07-01 [Thunder Cid]: If it's what I gotta do. Just waiting for my shot ^^

2009-07-01 [Alexi Ice]: Well Congrats!

2009-07-01 [Thunder Cid]: For what?

2009-07-01 [Alexi Ice]: For being put in high, it;s one step closer.

2009-07-01 [Thunder Cid]: Oh! I forgot XD